an old shoot but had a go at darkening down very busy background
Lovely shot, love the position/cropping of the arms, hair is great, bracelet is a tiny bit bright but i don't mind it. Absolutely no problem with the background, but there's a brighter area on her top by her left arm which catches my eye, and a single bright bit near the crook in her arm.
The viewer is drawn to the right arm which is brighter but could be easily darkened by burning. The model does not seem very relaxed but I cannot remember much about her though I am sure I have photographed her.
Dave
A good job of darkening the background, i'm unsure if there is still a bit more to be done at the top of her head. The models eyes are nice and sharp but feel that the skin is still a touch bright but not sure if its my monitor setup.
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an old shoot but had a go at darkening down very busy background
Lovely shot, love the position/cropping of the arms, hair is great, bracelet is a tiny bit bright but i don't mind it. Absolutely no problem with the background, but there's a brighter area on her top by her left arm which catches my eye, and a single bright bit near the crook in her arm.
The viewer is drawn to the right arm which is brighter but could be easily darkened by burning. The model does not seem very relaxed but I cannot remember much about her though I am sure I have photographed her.
Dave
A good job of darkening the background, i'm unsure if there is still a bit more to be done at the top of her head. The models eyes are nice and sharp but feel that the skin is still a touch bright but not sure if its my monitor setup.